United States securities and exchange commission logo March 15, 2023 Shao-Lee Lin, MD Chief Executive Officer ACELYRIN, Inc. 4149 Liberty Canyon Road Agoura Hills, CA 91301 Re: ACELYRIN, Inc. Draft Registration Statement on Form S-1 Submitted on February 10, 2023 CIK 0001962918 Dear Shao-Lee Lin: We have reviewed your draft registration statement and have the following comments. In some of our comments, we may ask you to provide us with information so we may better understand your disclosure. Please respond to this letter by providing the requested information and either submitting an amended draft registration statement or publicly filing your registration statement on EDGAR. If you do not believe our comments apply to your facts and circumstances or do not believe an amendment is appropriate, please tell us why in your response. After reviewing the information you provide in response to these comments and your amended draft registration statement or filed registration statement, we may have additional comments. Draft Registration Statement on Form S-1 submitted on February 10, 2023 Overview, page 1 1. Throughout your filing you make statements and predictions regarding the safety and efficacy of your product candidates. Safety and efficacy are conclusions that are within the sole authority of the FDA and are assessed throughout the entire development process. Given that none of your candidates have received FDA approval, it is not appropriate to state, imply or predict that they are effective or safe. Please remove all statements related to the safety and efficacy of your product candidates. For example: "Lonigutamab has been shown to be markedly more potent than the currently marketed therapy for thyroid eye disease (TED)." "izokibep demonstrated clinically meaningful and differentiated benefits..." Shao-Lee Lin, MD FirstName LastNameShao-Lee Lin, MD ACELYRIN, Inc. Comapany March NameACELYRIN, Inc. 15, 2023 March2 15, 2023 Page 2 Page FirstName LastName "Izokibep...with a safety profile consistent with that of the anti-IL-17A class as a whole." "Izokibep has demonstrated higher orders of clinical response in Part A of our Phase 2b/3 trial in HS, which we believe supports the potential to offer clinically meaningful, differentiated benefit to participants in this severe autoimmune condition..." "Clinical responses in this open label portion of our ongoing Phase 2b/3 trial in HS were demonstrated at higher orders of Hidradenitis Suppuativa Clinical Response (HiSCR)..." "These results from our trials in HS and PsA offer two independent sets of clinical data supporting our hypothesis that izokibep could offer clinically meaningful differentiated outcomes due to its high potency and small size, and therefore the potential to provide greater benefit to patients. Please note, this is not an inclusive list of the safety and efficacy claims you have included in your filing. You should include a description of your clinical trials, include a comparison of the objective data from your trials to the trial endpoints, discuss the statistical significance of such results and indicate whether a candidate was well tolerated in the Business section where the information can be discussed in proper context, without describing the results as "positive" or validating the therapeutic potential. To the extent that your product candidates have been well tolerated, you may indicate that this is the case. If there have been any serious adverse events, describe the events and indicate how many instances have occurred. It is only appropriate to compare the results of your candidate's trials to another product or product candidate if head to head trials were conducted. Our Pipeline, page 1 2. Please clarify if your global rights to izokibep apply to all indications or are limited to psoriatic arthritis. Summary Overview of Izokibep, page 3 3. Please revise your reference to orphan drug designation to clarify that such a designation neither shortens the development time or regulatory review time of a drug, nor does it provide any approval in the regulatory review or approval process and if your expected plans will change if you do not obtain orphan drug designation. 4. Clarify that the FDA has not consented to your plans to conduct only one Phase 3 clinical trial, rather than the generally required two Phase 3 clinical trials. Izokibep for the Treatment of Moderate-to-Severe HS, page 4 5. We note that the market research was conducted on our behalf by Skysis. Please file its consent as an exhibit to your registration statement. Our Strategy, page 8 Shao-Lee Lin, MD FirstName LastNameShao-Lee Lin, MD ACELYRIN, Inc. Comapany March NameACELYRIN, Inc. 15, 2023 March3 15, 2023 Page 3 Page FirstName LastName 6. Explain what "pipeline-in-a-program" means and its impact on your strategy. We are a clinical stage biopharma company with a limited history and no products approved for commercial sale., page 16 7. Revise your risk factor heading to indicate you have a history of losses and highlight the explanatory paragraph in your audit opinion raising substantial doubt about your ability to continue as a going concern. Additionally, disclose the potential effect the going concern opinion may have on your ability to raise additional funds through equity or debt financing. Our product candidates licensed from various third parties may be subject to retained rights., page 50 8. Revise your discussion to identify licenses that provide that the licensors retain certain rights, and describe the rights that the licensors have retained. Additionally, identify the licenses that are subject to "march-in rights." Use of Proceeds, page 83 9. Please enhance your disclosure to quantify the amount of proceeds you intend to use for each stated purpose and indicate the stage of development you expect to achieve for each proposed use for izokibep. Affibody Agreement, page 100 10. Please explain what priority review vouchers are and how the fair market value will be determined in accordance with the Affibody Agreement. Management's Discussion and Analysis of Financial Condition and Results of Operations Critical Accounting Policies and Significant Judgments and Estimates Stock-Based Compensation Expense, page 109 11. Once you have an estimated offering price or range, please explain to us how you determined the fair value of the common stock underlying your equity issuances and the reasons for any differences between the recent valuations of your common stock leading up to the IPO and the estimated offering price. This information will help facilitate our review of your accounting for equity issuances. Please discuss with the staff how to submit your response. Targeting IL-17A in the Treatment of HS, page 123 12. Clarify that secukinumab and bimekizumab are being developed by a third party and indicate whether they have received FDA approval. If they have not received FDA approval, clearly state that they have not been determined to be safe or effective. Shao-Lee Lin, MD FirstName LastNameShao-Lee Lin, MD ACELYRIN, Inc. Comapany March NameACELYRIN, Inc. 15, 2023 March4 15, 2023 Page 4 Page FirstName LastName Our Ongoing Phase 2b/3 Trial of Izokibep, page 126 13. Please describe the relevant preclinical and clinical trials and objective results of such trials supporting the INDs for your planned trial for AxSpa and ongoing trials for HS, PsA and uvetisis. Your discussion should identify the trial endpoints, the objective results, the p-values and statistical significance of the results. 14. Please Include a textual discussion of the table included on page 126. Your table should not not be included in lieu of a thorough descripting of your ongoing trial. Similarly, describe the table depicting your ongoing Phase 2b/3 Trial in PsA on page 132 and your ongoing Phase 2b/3 Trial in Uveitis on page 136. Current Treatments for PsA, page 127 15. Please include a textual discussion explaining Figure 10 on page 128. Your discussion should explain the terms ACR50, PAS175 and enthesitis. Additionally, explain which therapies are the standard of care for each each manifestation depicted. Summary of the Completed Phase 2 Trial of Izokibep in PsA, page 128 16. Please revise to include a textual description of your Phase 2 trial for PsA, rather than, or in addition to, a table. Your description should explain the acronyms and industry jargon included in your table so that a reader without specialized medical knowledge can understand who can participate in the trial, what the safety and efficacy endpoints are and the meaning of the terms Q2W, 16W, 24W and the significance of the axis along the bottom of the table. Please note, industry terms should be explained in the context of the discussion. 17. Revise the statement preceding Figure 12 on page 129 to remove the statement that you believe the results demonstrate izokobep has the potential to provide clinically meaningful, differentiated benefits in the treatment of PsA over existing therapies. 18. Explain what Figure 12 is attempting to depict. How are improvements measured? Explain what the percentages represent and how the information was gathered. Disclose the applicable p-vales and explain their meaning or indicate that the results were not statistically meaningful. Pharmacokinetic-pharmacodynamic (PK-PD) Modeling Supports Higher Doses, page 131 19. Revise our disclosure to provide the objective data that led you to conclude there was a lack of plateau without providing your conclusion. Additionally, revise the discussion to ensure that it is understandable for a person without specialized medical knowledge. Izokibep for the treatment of AxSpA, page 133 20. Please clarify whether the FDA has approved your Phase 3 clinical trials in AxSpA. If it has not, please explain the basis for your strategy for going directly to Phase 3 trials and Shao-Lee Lin, MD ACELYRIN, Inc. March 15, 2023 Page 5 discuss the possibility that the FDA may require a Phase 2 trial. 21. Please disclose the known aspects of your trials, such as the meaning of radiographic and non-radiographic, the clinical trial endpoints, and the number of participants. Evidence for the Role of IL-17A Inhibitors in the Treatment if Non-Infectious Uveitis, page 135 22. Unless secukinumab was approved for the treatment of uveitis, delete the statements that it demonstrated clinical benefits. You may present objective information from the trial providing the conclusion that it provided a clinical benefit. Our Lonigutamab (IGF-1R Monoclonal Antibody) Program, page 137 23. Please describe the preclinical trials related to Lonigutamab for the treatment of TED. Clinical Development, page 142 24. Describe the early proof-of-concept data your Phase 1 trial is designed to generate. Our XLRN-517 (c-KIT Monoclonal Antibody) Program, page 142 25. Please provide a textual description of Figure 23, including the relevance of the information in the column on the right of the table. 26. Your pipeline table appearing on pages 2 and 117 indicates you have completed preclinical trials for chronic urticaria. Revise to describe the preclinical trials. General 27. Please provide us with copies of all written communications, as defined in Rule 405 under the Securities Act, that you, or anyone authorized to do so on your behalf, present to potential investors in reliance on Section 5(d) of the Securities Act, whether or not they retain copies of the communications. You may contact Ibolya Ignat at 202-551-3636 or Vanessa Robertson at 202-551-3649 if you have questions regarding comments on the financial statements and related matters. Please contact Cindy Polynice at 202-551-8707 or Suzanne Hayes at 202-551-3675 with any other questions. FirstName LastNameShao-Lee Lin, MD Sincerely, Comapany NameACELYRIN, Inc. Division of Corporation Finance March 15, 2023 Page 5 Office of Life Sciences FirstName LastName